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Review:AlexFan says:
Hey there, I'm here for the 12 Days of Reviewing. This gave me the push that I needed to actually read the new chapter for this particularly awesome fanfiction.

I was so excited to see what had caused Adela to faint like that and I kept hoping that I would find out while reading but it never happened. However, I do look forward to when Rose does find out about why Adela fainted like she did.

The tension between her and Malfoy was so thick you could've cut it with a knife. Wow. I'm beginning to expect the two of them to either attack each other or hug each other (probably not hug though).

That last scene where Rose went to the Malfoy household to check up on her friend and instead met Scorpius was great. I could picture it in my head so clearly. It was just like a movie playing in my head.

But anyway, brilliant chapter!

Author's Response: It'd be no fun to reveal things too soon. ;) Not only was it necessary for Rose to have an altercation with Scorpius, but I think it'd be better to show more of Mr. Fitzgerald before hearing about the scandal so that readers can decide for themselves what kind of person he is.

Perhaps more importantly, the longer that Rose doesn't know, the more tension there is between her and Scorpius. It also draws her further into the Malfoy family, which is both a good and bad thing for obvious reasons. ;)

I'm so glad that you enjoyed that last scene! I hadn't planned it initially, but once I started writing it, all of the pieces fell together so easily, especially the visual aspect. :D

Thank you very much for stopping by to read and review!


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