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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hi, here for the 12 days of reviewing challenge on the forums!

Haha, I really loved this one-shot as it had me laughing all the way through. At first I was just wah we donít know the MCís name but I really liked it at the end because despite her loud and talkative voice she is still anonymous to us which was rather funny. Plus the way she must have annoyed Hugo by doing that.

I really loved her narration by the way, it was very different to what Iím used to but very lively and fun too. I really wish we could have more of her thoughts because she certainly is different, but in a good way mind so no worries there.

Haha, Hugo was awesome too. I never imagined him to have that poster boy appeal but he did here. Heís comment on fangirls was also brilliant and the girls retort had me giggling. Seriously, write more of these two they are hilarious together because heís so serious and I imagine him to frown a lot where as the MC was just crazy, no other words for her!

Great one-shot!

-Kiana

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. I rarely get one so detailed! You're review made me feel really good abput my writing, I haven't really been feeling it lately so yeah. Thanks! I'm kinda motivated to write another one-shot about these two. I dunno, or maybe a really short story. If I find the time haha. Exams exams exams. That's what my life is basically about at the mo. I find the time to read, but writing is a different matter entirely! :) xxx

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