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Review:HeyMrsPotter says:
Nadia! I haven't properly read any of the stories I follow since before NaNo and so I'm here to fix it.

You always tell me that I write Draco well, but honestly, your Draco is perfect. The part in this chapter by the lake with Astoria was just heart wrenching. He loves Hermione but he loves his family and...sigh. Must Voldy get in the way? Can we just pretend he doesn't exist and let them be happy? Please?

I love that the further into this story you write, the more in tune with the characters feelings you get. There was an excellent balance betweeen Hermione's and Draco's in here and I could really feel their heartbreak. Just beautiful.

As always, can't wait for the update and I'm sorry it took so long to get around to reading this.

Author's Response: Hey Dee! Don't worry about it! ♥ I'm still glad that **someone** is still reading this, despite the horrendous writing! I do think my later chapters are better though :D

I honestly love Astoria, and she's quite the character in this, you'll see in the end. Sadly, Voldy's Moldy and he's rather evil as well, keeping two lovers apart. Draco is in quite the dilemma, but at least he's happy for now ;)

AWH, YOU THINK IT WAS BEAUTFUL? :D Lol, that's a first. I'm pleased the heartbreak was pretty obvious.

Ah.. update.. right.. Okay, so first an chapter of Where the Dust Blows, and then this? Okay? Yeah.

*back to keyboard*

Thanks so much for this wonderful review!


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