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Review:LightLeviosa5443 says:
Hey! I'm here for the BvB review battle!!

I love love love love love this story, and I loved loved loved this chapter. I was super excited when I saw that I had to review one of your stories because it reminded me to come back and review this gem!

I really enjoyed reading James in a different setting than a bar. It was nice to see him interact with Hugo, and then how he reacted to seeing mystery man and those annoying girls.

One of the things I enjoyed most was the fact that I felt his annoyance with those girls almost as much as he did, and when he realized he was staring I felt that fluster. You do a really good job of making the emotions sort of jump off of the screen and grab you, so that you're more invested in the story.

Really job well done.

xoxo LL

Author's Response: Hey there - it's so lovely to see you back again! :)

I'm so glad you like this story so much - it's kinda one of my real babies, if that makes sense, so I always love hearing that people like this! Particularly that you came back to do this - I'm so happy! :D

Thank you! I liked putting him in a bar and making him mates with his cousin - it's kinda different to other things I read which was mostly the point of this, so I'm glad you picked up on that! :)

Gah, thank you so much! :) I love description and try to be careful about it, so I'm glad you thought it worked well! :D

Thank you so so much for the lovely pair of reviews - it was so nice to see you come back again! :)

Aph xx

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