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Review:Rumpelstiltskin says:
Hey there!

I'm here for the sixth task of 12 Days of Reviewing on the Forums!

I've been meaning to read this anyway, as I love Remus/Sirius ships. I thought the idea of Remus and Sirius raising Harry after James and Lily's deaths was a positively marvelous plot for an AU. I was slightly reluctant at first, only because it had the potential to be a cliche, but I absolutely adored what you did with it!

The interactions between the three are so very adorable! I love that Harry stole Sirius' wand to clean up his room. I also loved that Harry stated that he, clearly, knew that Sirius and Remus were kissing, but Sirius told him that he didn't ;). This story really made me smile, seeing Harry able to have a normal (wizarding) childhood.

The fact that you created a friendship between Sirius and Narcissa in this was fantastic. I believe that, under circumstances differing from the HP series, that they could truly get on. Narcissa character was really shadowed in the series given the circumstances that she was surrounded with, and only rarely did we get to see some of her best qualities. Given those few moments, I have felt that she is really a good person, so I was pleasantly surprised to see the two making up in the end.

One last comment, Draco and Harry's blossoming friendship was quite endearing. It seems as though (almost) everything has been put right in this world that you have created.

Fantastic story!


Author's Response: Aww thanks! I'm glad you liked it! That was pretty much my goal with this story, to make a world where everything was put right, and everyone was able to get as much of a happily ever after as possible. Also, I love your username :) Rumpelstiltskin is my absolute favorite!

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