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Review:Infinityx says:
Hello there! I'm here for the sixth day of 12 days of reviewing challenge.

This was a really well written interesting chapter. When Hermione was first introduced into it, I thought she was ranting about Malfoy. That was a wonderful surprise! I'm really intrigued about her relationship with Ron. She doesn't seem happy but the Ginny and Mrs. Weasley seem ecstatic. So that led me to wonder if there's something she's hiding from them about Ron.

I love your characterization of Draco. He seems so incredibly lovable from the very first chapter and its so obvious that a relationship is going to blossom between him and Hermione. They seem very comfortable and free with each other, and I hope there are a lot of twists in the plot rather than Hermione just leaving Ron for Draco.

I also love your OC Loren. She seems like she might be a good friend to Hermione and I wonder what will happen when Hermione starts dating Draco. You've certainly made me extremely curious.

I love the way the voice is so casual and the chapter flows so naturally.
I'll be sure to keep reading. :)

Cheers,
Erin.

Author's Response: You're so nice! Your reviews are wonderful. Thank you so much!

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