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Review:800 words of heaven says:
REVIEW TAG!

A wonderful new story for the new year! Yayayayayay! I love Tonks as a character, but I don't often read her because stories tend to focus on darker times, which always just makes me feel sad, but this was just great!

I really liked how you focused on such a pivotal moment in her life. Those feelings of not being good enough, and starting out on something new, and just trying to fit in were feelings that were really relateable. There were moments in here where I was like, "Is this me?"

I also really enjoyed the subtle way you described Andromeda and Ted's marriage. Nothing was ever said explicity, but I still got a good impression of what their relationship was like. The best part was that it wasn't a complete impression. It was more like an inkling as to the inner workings of their marriage - just like Tonks was beginning to understand.

I really don't have much more to say, because your writing is always so fantastic, and I always come across as a bit of a fangirl in my reviews (because I secretly am a bit of a fangirl of your writing). This was really wonderful as always!

Author's Response: Hey, thanks for stopping by!

I definitely felt like I could relate to Tonks's feelings and hoped that others could, too. It can be so scary to try something new without knowing whether it will work out or if you'll be good at it.

I'm glad you liked my little hints about Andromeda and Ted's relationship. Andromeda retains some of her old-world sentiments and worries about her daughter, whereas Ted is a little more open but still wants the best for his little girl. I like how you said that Tonks was just beginning to understand it along with the reader, because I think that's true.

Thank you so much for your kind review!

-Amanda


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