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Review:AlexFan says:
Hello there! I'm here for the 12 Days of Reviewing!

I haven't read this story in a while but after re-reading this first chapter I remember why I chose to read it!

I love seeing the relationship develop between James and Lily. It seems so easy between the two of them and the banter that they throw back and forth is just so smooth and lighthearted.

Lily may have lost a friend that day but by the looks of it, she's gained another one in James. I also loved the little references that were made what with the Animagus (that doesn't sound like it makes sense but let me explain).

What I mean by reference is when Lily asks about Animagus and James has so much knowledge on the topic and we as reader's know why but Lily doesn't. She doesn't even question why James knows so much on the topic but just accepts it as something that he's good at. I kept thinking to myself "Oh Lily, if you only knew what really went on with James."

And then when she asked him what his favourite animal was and he replied with a stag and that just made me really happy for some reason and I started thinking, "Oh Lily, if you only knew why his favourite animal is a stag."

I had a lot of "if you only knew," moments while reading.

This got my Jily feels going all over again!

Author's Response: Hello!

Don't worry I understood ;) When I wrote it I felt so clever, ahaha!

I had no clue what to write as his favourite animal and I felt like James wouldn't have thought of that so he just said stag to save trouble, ahaha! :p

Anyway, thank you so much for the kind review! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

- Kayla :)

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