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Review:marauderfan says:
For day 6 of the 12 days of reviewing!

MAGGIE ♥ Ah, I can't believe how long it's taken me to come back to this story, I'm so sorry! I really loved the first three chapters. And I loved this one too!

Aw, the conversation between Helga and Mary was very sweet :) I'm sure I've said before, but I LOVE the way you write Helga. She's so free spirited and caring. Which leads me to my next point - the boggart seems appropriate for her. How terrifying :O

I really liked the way Salazar finally displayed some emotion to her, even if he doesn't trust her enough to share his secret, about his greatest fear. Teehee, Helga totally has a crush. I love that she's so free and honest about everything, it's quite the contrast to Salazar who is very distant and keeps his true self locked up. I guess it'll take him a while to get out of that habit. Although I notice at the end of this chapter Helga's honesty is taking a turn - or at least, less free, with concealing the truth about her heritage...

You wrote Godric so well too - he would be super protective of her like that, and wish he'd gone in her place because that's the noble thing to do! And she's like "Whatever I don't need a man to save me." :D I absolutely love their friendship.

Lovely chapter! I am so glad I came back to read this and I hope to read more soon :)

Author's Response: Hi Kristin! Oh my goodness this review is so wonderful! I'm so sorry I've been away forever, but I want you to know that it makes my day every time I read it :)

You always hit the nail on the head with your perceptions of Helga, and it makes me happy :) I'm glad you saw her free spirited nature, and that you thought the boggart was a good touch. I worried a lot about that part as I was writing, and it's great to hear that you enjoyed it. I wanted it to be dramatic but not over the top.

One of the things I love most about this chapter is the fact that we see cracks in Salazar's perfect shell. It was really fun to write, especially from Helga's perspective :) And yes, this is where we see Helga first starting to wrestle with the issue of honesty about her blood. For me, the most interesting conflicts are always internal.

Thanks so much for the wonderful review, Kristin! I'm so ashamed of myself for going MIA, but I love hearing from you and I really appreciate your thoughts :)

--Maggie


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