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Review:marauderfan says:
For day 6 of the 12 Days of Reviewing

Kiana ♥ ♥ I'm a horrible person, I meant to catch up on this ages ago. But fortunately the review challenge gave me the opportunity to read more so here I am!

I really like the way you've written the beginning of Andromeda and Ted's relationship - her cautious, him understanding, she's constantly on the lookout for her family finding out, he wants his family to meet her. It's sweet. And omg Ted running after her, that was really cute!

Yes, but you'll always be a baby to the two of us. -- I loved this! As different as Andromeda and Bellatrix are, and as much as they try to deny their relation to each other, they ARE sisters and sometimes it shows. I really appreciate that you put that in.

Aw, I want to tell Andromeda that there is still hope, Narcissa's not completely gone yet! :( But of course, I guess after Andromeda leaves Hogwarts that removes the good angel from Narcissa's shoulder, so to speak, and Narcissa's back to only bad influence again. I've always thought Narcissa was a really easily influenced person.

Great chapter! I'm so glad I got to come read this again and I'll be back for more :)

Author's Response: Kristin! It's more than fine with you moving soon, it must be hard to keep up with everything :P

I'm so glad that you liked it and found it cute, usually I stay well clear of all things fluffy but with these two it somehow seemed to come naturally which was a nice surprise :)

I know what you mean about them sometimes accepting that they are siblings. I almost wish I got to write from Bella's perspective and see what she thought because I can't help but wonder whether it would have been the same or not.

I know what you mean about Narcissa being easily influenced, and that idea of her being like that and Andromeda being the good influencer but then leaving plays a part later on.

Thanks for such a great review Kristin! ♥

-Kiana


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