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Review:MissesWeasley123 says:
Hello Amanda! I'm here for the 12 Days of Reviewing! An excellent way to read more of your work!

First of all, I love this song so much. Till this day, I still listen to it. I saw that this had been completed and then the lyrics in the summary.. I had to read this. You did such a great job at using the lyrics to convey such a piece. It was brilliantly done.

I really don't like Ginny. She never was my favourite character, dunno why. But you made me sympathize with her, and I think it was great, that for a chapter, I was able to look at her differently.

Your descriptions are so vivid, and insanely awesome. You don't write scenes, you show them. It's brilliant.

All of her fear and her emotion was conveyed so greatly. It's so tough to be able to not only make it realistic, but to make the reader be scared and emotional with the character. For a moment I was Ginny.

Great writing Amanda!

Author's Response: Hey there, thanks for stopping by :)

I also really love this song. There are some great covers out there now, but nothing quite gets it right like the original. I'm glad you felt like the lyrics were used effectively and really added to the piece.

Writing this story really made me want to reconsider Ginny, which is part of why I wanted to feature her in my current WIP. I struggled with which character to choose as the focus, but I'm glad I got to know Ginny better. I hope you come and check out "This Devilry" and see if you like Ginny there.

I work really hard on my imagery and emotion, so it's always good to hear that those came across effectively. I live by the "show, not tell" rule, that's for certain.

Thank you so much for your sweet review :)

-Amanda


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