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Review:academica says:
Hello, here for the Review Battle!

Wow, this is definitely a unique plot! It's cool that you decided to explore such unusual background characters. Given what we know about Walburga from canon, I can only imagine how prejudiced and unpleasant her mother must be. It's interesting that she and her siblings have these ideas about wanting to break free and disliking their pureblood lifestyle, and yet it seems all has been forgotten when it comes time for Walburga to have her own children.

Your writing style is really formal, which I would expect given the subject matter. I'd be curious to see if Walburga will loosen up, both in word and deed, over time or if she'll just grow into an even stiffer version of herself.

I noticed a few typos and some awkward phrasing scattered throughout, but it doesn't really take away from the piece. Overall, I commend you on trying something new. Good luck with the story!

-Amanda

Author's Response: Hi Amanda!

Thanks for the great review. I'm glad that you enjoyed reading this. There's bound to be awkward phrases and typos in my work. Thanks so much!

-Janelle


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