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Review:LilyLou says:
Hey, LilyLou here for the Ravenclaw Review Battle!

I loved this little one shot. It was short, but I believe it truly covered everything perfectly. You expressed Severus' grief wonderfully, and I truly felt as though I was the one grieving over the loss of Lily. I love how you incorporated his opinions; it was very cannon. I felt that everything was perfect as far as that went. His regret, his mourning, his loneliness, and especially his dislike toward James Potter I.

I really enjoyed reading this little one shot. Well done!

-Janelle

Author's Response: Hi! I'm sorry it took me lots of time to respond to your review.

Thank you so much! I had 500 words, so I tried to use them to their fullest potential. Severus is a very complex character, and it was quite a challenge to portray him as jealous, lustful, and depressed (if that makes any sense). I'm sorry that I made you feel sad about Lily! It was an accident, I swear! :)

Yeah, I think that Severus, for all of his wonderfulness, is still quite a jerk. He really hates James, but he loves Lily, and so he hates Harry but wants to keep him alive. His whole existence is confusing, but above all, he was a sad, sad man. I'm so glad that you thought I did him justice.

Thanks again!

~UnluckyStar57


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