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Review:Infinityx says:
Hey there! I'm here for the sixth day of the 12 days of reviewing challenge.

This is such a brilliantly written chapter. There are no mistakes as far as I can tell and I absolutely love your writing style. Your descriptions are so vivid and set the tone of each scene really well.

I love the way you've portrayed Hermione's character. It's a bit OOC from the books but I also think the personality fits her perfectly. It doesn't seem to deviate too much from her character, just enough to show that she's more grown up and headstrong. I'm intrigued to see how she'll develop throughout the story.

I was itching to read this story when I saw in your description that the relationship between Draco and Hermione will progress slowly for I've read too many fics in which they're enemies in one chapter and married after the next couple of chapters.
I also think you've portrayed the haughty air of the Malfoys wonderfully.

Another thing that interested me was Victor Krum's appearance. It really gives a well rounded feel to the chapter.

I love all the little details that you've taken the time to put in. The chapter has a beautiful flow and the language is impeccable. I enjoyed reading this immensely and will be sure to continue reading.

Cheers!
- Erin

Author's Response: Hi and Happy New Year! Thank you for the thorough review. I have a couple little things to edit in this story, but I'm so glad you liked the first chapter! I will be rereading the story to make sure things are tightened up before I stop tinkering with it altogether;) Thank you for reading and reviewing!

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