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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Hello! I'm here from the Twelve Days of Reviewing over at the forums. This is Day Six. :)

I love the start of this story, with the super intense flashback and everything! Obviously Alice Longbottom and Albus Potter have something to discuss in the future--why was there a spark between them? Uh oh, hidden chemistry! :)

Alice seems like an interesting character, as does Albus. She's a "stick-in-the-mud," and he's a casanova! How can two people who are SO different be SO attracted to each other (and not know it)?! I'm hoping that they'll figure it out eventually!

The bet! HAH! Maybe that'll teach Albus to keep his lips to himself! Or maybe not... I look forward to seeing what will happen next. I will definitely come back and read the rest of this story later on. :)

Happy New Year!


Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. Sorry it took so long to get back to you. I'm usually much better about replying to reviews. I hope you enjoyed the story.

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