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Review:MissesWeasley123 says:
Hi there! I'm here again for the 12 Days of Reviewing from the forums!

This chapter was seriously one of the sweetest things in the world. It had everything, from characters to plot and it was such a nice introduction to this rivalry Scorpius and Rose will have in the forthcoming chapters. You set the bitterness right from the start, and it was so real, the whole concept.

I loved Hermione. Her characterization was brilliantly done. Lines like this one made me smile like a goof, it was brilliant:

Hermione looked up at him and said, "Oh wipe that grin off your face."

I love Ron and Hermione as a pair, and Ron was just the sweetest thing to Hermione. You really have a knack for writing romance.

And Draco! He's so hard to write. But you do it so well. This was hilarious:

"Oh yeah, I'm done. That was all I needed. I hope you don't mind me asking, but are you sure you are the father? I mean I just don't see the resemblance..." Malfoy smirked at him. -- LIKE, WHOA MALFOY, CALM DOWNN. He's so mean but it fits him so what the heck, I loved him in this. Especially the little things he muttered under his breath, gold!

And children are so tough to write but Rose was amazingly done. Her relationship with Ron was brilliant and I really liked it. Great work!

Author's Response: Nice to see another review from you. I am a huge Ron/Hermione fan so this was a little tribute to them. I also thought it would be a good set up to show the tension between the Malfoys and the Weasleys. As for Draco, I don't think it is him being mean but more of him having a fun. Still it isn't very nice.
Thank you so much for coming back and reviewing this chapter. unfortunately it is the relationship with Ron that is going to give her a lot of heartache.

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