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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hi here for the 12 days of reviewing challenge on the forums!

I really liked this portrayal of Wolfstar because I really got a sense of their relationship and how much they both loved each other and meant to each other. Gah, itís just the idea of them two raising Harry and possibly having a happy childhood and that thought is really lovely. Iím just imagining the possibilities now for Harry and it sounds as if heíll have a much happier life because of that.

I really liked how this was from Siriusí perspective as he was closer to James and Lily given that he was Jamesí best friend and this meant that you really got to explore the grief and heart-break he must have been feeling in a much greater depth. It was all so pure and heartfelt that in certain places I really felt as if I was going to tear up or something similar.

You also recounted Siriusí memories with James, Lily and Harry in happier times really well too so for a short chapter you certainly conveyed a lot and really gave us a sense of Siriusí past. I just felt in some of the larger paragraphs about that, it might be served best if they were spilt up to make reading easier as some of them were rather large.

Other than that, it seems as if this story is off to a really great start!

-Kiana

Author's Response: Yeah, I do have a tendency to rattle on a bit :P And this story was uploaded with zero editing because I was on a deadline, so that probably didn't help. I'm glad you liked the story itself, though!

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