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Review:LightLeviosa5443 says:
Review Battle!

So, I don't normally read stories about James and Lily, though this one was really just Lily, but I absolutely LOVED it. I love how you conveyed how Lily felt, how she missed her mum, how Severus had made her feel, how she felt around James.

Your description's impeccable and I admire that you were able to put so much emotion and so much backstory into just one scene of a one-shot. Brilliant job. I honestly couldn't even find CC to comment upon to add more to this review. Just that I absolutely loved your story.

xoxo LL

Author's Response: Hello!

I'm happy you felt like Lily's emotions were realistic and that you enjoyed the description. I always try to pack a lot into my stories, even the one-shots, and I'm pleased when it works out well :)

Thanks so much for your kind review!

-Amanda


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