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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hey Kayla! Here for the 12 days of reviewing challenge over on the forums and as I saw this was Draco/Astoria I couldnít resist reading it :D

Ah, I really loved this opening chapter it was so cute! You started off really well with leaving them all nameless, because even though I knew it was Draco and Astoria I sort of could build up my own image of them without being judgemental with their names. I also liked Dracoís thoughts at the beginning too because they were all so measured, and it really fitted with his personality.

Haha, Draco thought she was Daphne. That made me laugh way too much!

Aw, Astoria was so cute. She had this lovely, bright personality about her and she was one of those people you just want to hug for their cuteness. I really liked how you made her a fan of Muggle ways such as doing Muggle cooking and then knowing about PTSD, because it was an unusual quirk and it will be interesting to see how it affects Draco and his views on Muggles. I also really liked the idea of her organisation because I never really thought about the orphans of the war, but itís such an interesting issue to highlight so kudos for that!

I liked how you still kept Draco Draco with the way he felt sick about doing it the Muggle way and the way he turned to alcohol because he doesnít seem like the type to have too good coping strategies so it made sense for him to be like that :P

Iím going to finish the challenge and then come back and read some more as this is so cute!


Author's Response: Hey, Kiana!

Thank you so much for all your lovely compliments! They really put a smile on my face! :D

I'm glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for the review! :)

- Kayla :)

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