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Review:BookDinosaur says:
Hello Kayla! I'm here for the Sixth of the Twelve Days of Reviewing Challenge! :) And also because I wanted to read your story.

I really liked reading this! I have a sort of not-so-hard spot for Draco and Astoria so I'm looking forward to reading this. I really like how Draco is still enamoured with Daphne, although I can't see how she didn't notice his staring, it sounded quite intense. :P It makes sense that he would like one of his fellow pure blood Slytherins, and I think she was in the same year as him as well.

Astoria sounds like such a lovely person! I mean, I'm pretty sure I wouldn't invite the almost-stranger who just bumped into to for a lunch, but then, I'm pretty sure I wouldn't set up an organisation for kids who'd been hurt by the war either, so she's just better than I am. :P The little group she's running sounds really nice as well, and it's so sad to think about young kids who might have developed disorders like PTSD from the war. :( But it's realistic as well, and undoubtedly there would have been hurt people around after the war.

Draco sounds like he's going through a tough time as well. People can't really be friendly to him, seeing the part the Malfoys played in the war, and be sounds really lonely, but at the same time it sounds like he's trying to fix himself and his views about Muggles and muggleborns, and I respect him so much for that. And the way he kept mentioning his date with the Firewhiskey made me laugh. ;)

I think that maybe Astoria and her society for children would be the way for Draco to heal himself, and I wouldn't mind some Draco/Astoria along the way!

I really enjoyed reading this Kayla, you did a great job. Well done! :)

Author's Response: Hey, Emily!

To be honest, I think she did notice it but in my head canon Daphne is a bit cruel so she deliberately ignored him, ahahaha :p

To Astoria, Draco isn't a stranger technically and yeah, she's extraordinarily friendly so that probably does affect it a bit, ahaha :p

Thank you so much for the lovely comments, Emily! They really made me smile! :D

- Kayla :)


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