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Review:MrsKatieGrint says:
Hey there! KatieRoo from the forums here with your challenge review!(:

First off, I am incredibly sorry for the delay, saying my holiday has been crazy would be an understatement, yet, this story was well worth the wait!

I have to say, I haven't really ever come across too many slash fics, and the ones I have were just almost awkward for me to read. Yet, I think you did a wonderful job here in this opening chapter. Gosh, I don't want to sound like I'm homophobic, because I'm not, it just the other stories I have read were just that, awkward.

Moving on before I shove a bigger foot in my mouth, I seriously think you did an awesome job of covering all the loopholes right off the bat. I love everything that you have here about Charlie. He seems wonderful, and you did a really great job characterizing him!
Brad also seems worthy of Charlie.(: I was worried about him there for a little bit, but you've convinced me otherwise.

I also love how you related this back to real time, keeping in line with the books, especially the battle. I think that just added so much to the story.

I think the flow and plot so far is brilliant, and I can't wait to read more about Brad and Charlie, although I know the end is coming for them soon.:(

Cheers to a wonderful chapter, and more! Katie(:

Author's Response: Hi Katie!

I'm sorry I've taken such a long time to get back and respond to this.

haha, i know what you mean about some slash. This was my first slash story so I'm glad it didn't fall into the awkward category.

It was fun weaving Savage into a realistic seeming story about Charlie. Charlie was interesting to decompose into a full person.

Brad is one of my favorite people I made up for HP. He did have a sketchy bit with the Ministry but he did turn it around the best he could.

Thank you so much for a lovely review!

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