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Review:slytherinchica08 says:
Wow this is such a wonderful beginning! It really sucked me in right away and already has me wondering what is going to happen next as well as guessing what has already happened to them. Poor Teddy, I hope that he is alright. You know, I really don't have much to say about this chapter at all. It was all really wonderfully done and I couldn't find anything wrong or make any suggestions to make it better. It read extremely well, there was never a hesitation or spot that left me questioning about what you meant. The description was there and helped me picture some of the torture and harsh weather that they must have endured on their trip before being captured and also gave me an idea of what things had been like for them once they were captured. I was all excited for them, thinking that they were going to be able to get out without any problems and then bam! A person showed up, one that they obviously knew but yet I have no idea who it is. I'm hoping that its not the Rob that she was writing to on the walls but I also feel like it would be right if it was him. Honestly this first chapter was done really well and I do look forward to the next and I will be trying to keep my eyes out for any updates! Great Job!


Author's Response: I'm glad it sucked you in! I think that's always the mark of a good first chapter and it's quite difficult to achieve so that is high praise indeed. Thank you so much for the lovely review!

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