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Review:peppersweet says:
Hi, here for the 12 days of reviewing challenge! I have a real soft spot for next-gen Lucy fics, and this is no exception. Like youíve written her here, I always picture her as the slightly wayward one in the Weasley family - what else would you expect from Percy Weasley's daughter?

I thought it was really sweet here how you sketched out Lucy's relationship with Percy. So often, fanfic writers - myself included - make their relationship quite strained, so it was refreshing and generally quite heartwarming to see them getting on well. I loved this line: She thought again of her father, how proud he was whenever she came to him with good grades, or a new job, or any new thought really. I really like the idea of Percy just being curious to hear anything she has to say. It's desperately sad that Audrey's dead in this story, which makes for a very bittersweet ending, and I get the feeling Lucy and Percy are kind of adrift here. I wonder what Lucy's relationship with Molly is like.

One thing that did confuse me here was this line: There was the broomshed where she and Lily would sneak in and take Lilyís brothersí brooms, just to fly around a bit. - is this the burrow? Or is it just Percy and Audrey's house? In which case, why does the Potter family keep their brooms there? Sorry if I missed something there, but that stuck out to me.

Nice work! A belated merry christmas and a happy new year to you :) ♥

Author's Response: Wow this is a belated response to you but thank you so so much for reviewing! I've always been kind of fascinated by Percy's daughters, and I've just started really writing out that fascination. And that one line I can see being confusing haha, I had pictured it as them living in the burrow, and so it being where everyone kept a broom, to go out and play Quidditch in the backyard. But thank you again for reviewing. I'm thinking I'm going to start a Lucy or Molly fic based back in their Hogwarts years, so keep an eye out if you're interested! :)

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