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Review:Rumpelstiltskin says:
Hello dear!

I am here for the fifth task of the 12 Days of Reviewing challenge on the forums.

This was positively heartbreaking! I nearly cried.

Dennis' unanswered questions to Colin are almost too much! Colin died a hero, as did many people in the school that day. The initial reactions to Colin's departure to Hogwarts were fantastic. I especially loved the father's paranoid state due to the war's ominous pressure.

In the section where Shaklebolt is speaking directly to Dennis, I really loved the lines of Denis speaking to Colin in between. It created very powerful emotions that shone through the dialogue alone.

Ginny's relation to Dennis' situation was a nice touch, as well. Dennis is nowhere near alone in his loss, despite how great it is. The war really compromised many families, but the living will begin to move forward with the help of others. I loved their pact, it was very touching.

We will never forget.

This was a fantastic tribute to Colin!

-Rumpel

Author's Response: Thank you so much for this lovely review! I rarely get them (Blame me for never updating, hahaha), and so this has honestly made my day!

I originally wrote far more than this; two or three more chapters, but I'm not really sure if I'll post them. I think perhaps this was meant to be a one-shot.

I'm not quite sure why I wrote this, to be honest. It was back in May, the night before I left for camp. I was up all night, and apparently had nothing better to do than write a depressing letter from a minor character to a dead one. I love the world that JK Rowling has created.

Thank you again- so, so, so much- for this beautiful review! I really appreciate it.

~MagykNargle


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