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Review:patronus_charm says:
Hi Sam, here for the 12 days of reviewing over at the forums and Iím so glad that Iím reading this!

I always love the Black family because of the fairy tale air they seem to evoke and it was definitely in this story. The first chapter, with the great introduction to them all and at a ball which went with the fairytaleness (new word!) of it all. Lucius and Narcissaís interactions with one and another were so innocent and sweet it really had me gushing over how they were still in the young love stage.

I liked her brief thoughts about her sister and wondering what she was up to with Ted and it makes me hope that those two make an appearance later on as I do love Ted and Andromeda. Also, I love the Only Exception by Paramore and I think itís a great inspiration for the story!

Aw the second chapter was just perfect! It was so perfectly pureblood with Narcissaís use of vocabulary, then the names of her friends, her innocent thoughts about Lucius and just the way theyíre going about courting one another and itís so cute. I just want to squish them or something. Also, their brief conversation about books was so sweet as it showed theyíre really beginning to get to know one another.

I liked that Lucius brought up Andromeda because it makes me think that heís open to accepting her as part of Cissyís family so she might see her later on. Gah, I just wish the Black girls could be friends at times, so reading this here is making my wish look more hopeful!

Aw they kiss, so cute! I hope thereís more soon, and poke me when there is!


Author's Response: Hey, Kiana!

The fairy tale air is something that draws me in, too, the same with Founders. There's just something about it and it was fun to include the ball and show a bit of fairytaleness (awesome word!). This is definitely the young love stage. :)

Andromeda does make an appearance. I don't know about Ted yet, so don't expect to see him, but I hope so. I love the song, too, it seemed very fitting.

The getting to know each other stage is definitely the cutest part of their relationship. I just want to hug them.

Lucius would do anything for Narcissa, including acknowledge her sister even if he doesn't agree with her actions. We'll find out what happens.

Thank you so much for leaving a review!


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