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Review:MissesWeasley123 says:
Jenny! Hi, I'm here for the 12 Days of Reviewing! I was so excited to see you had EXACTLY 10 stories! I made my way through the reviews just to check I hadn't already reviewed this anonymously... Because again, this is one of those fics I've read, but stupidly not reviewed because I was lazy. And then I saw someone named Naida reviewed and my feelings were crushed and I felt even more stupid because how do I manage to spell My own name wrong? But then I hadn't and YUS. VICTOREH.

AND SUCH PERFECTION, ARE YOU KIDDING ME?! I love Neville and I love this. This is truly why I have you favourited as an author. You are beyond talented. There were so many emotions in this, and at the end I was left feeling just sad. Very very sad.

He's in a state, just like his parents. That was gut wrenching. Like, nooo. I don't like you for doing that. UGH. It was so emotional to see him that way. I felt terrible for him.

Your descriptions are wonderful, and brilliant as always. I am both amazed and jealous at your talent. Reading pieces like these that are so well written makes me so happy.. but then this piece is so sad.

Lloyd was both despicable and likable. I don't know. I liked him, but then he left Neville in the end. That frustrated me and made me very angry. Because there was no hope at all.

GAH. Superb writing Jenny1

Author's Response: Hey Nadia! Thanks for checking out my author page for the reviewing challenge! I didn't actually know I had ten stories haha, I thought it was less! Pahaha you are so funny sometimes! :P

Aww thank you! I really loved writing this story because it was something a bit different and out of my comfort zone so I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. It's very much an AU piece because it's kind of a 'what if...' story. I'm glad you thought it was emotional! That was definitely the aim of the game.

Haha I didn't like me either ;) but I think Neville is one of those characters where it really could have gone either way for him because he had a parallel life to Harry. A much worse outcome definitely could have happened to him in the books and I wanted to explore that!

You are so cute! Thank you. :) That's a really interesting insight into Lloyd's character actually. He did leave him because to him Neville was just another war hero who he didn't really have any connection to. And he was just trying to save his own skin. ;)

Thanks for reviewing lovely!


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