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Review:MissesWeasley123 says:
Hi hi hi.

I've been seeing in you sig, that you were going to start posting a new story. I've always wanted to read something by you... But all of your stories look so nice and I just could never choose :P Plus novel lengths scare me because I'm super slow. I like this way better too, one chapter at a time.

And, wow? This was amazing. You write beautifully. Already I am engrossed into your plot and it's very hard to make the first chapter/prologue interesting but you managed to do that in a really effective way. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

I think I'm sensing more of a friendship between Victoire and Teddy rather than a romantic relationship. I find that very clever and unique, which makes it so much of a bonus to reading this fic. But then there's also this line, which told me otherwise:

"Did you?" His tone was strained, almost too casual. He had stopped shuffling too. -- this made me feel like Teddy might have feelings for her, and then this:

We were more than the best friends we had been three months ago when we left London for this strange new continent. -- which is basically telling me they're more than friends. Anyways, I'm a confused person and definitely no Ravenclaw, and I'll find out in due time.

It's brilliant, honestly. Another thing I must add is this Robin guy, I'm so intrigued about him, and why Victoire needs his forgiveness... What has she done? Is it because she left for Africa? Colour me interested.

And the later! That was very intense. And the cliffhanger was rather cruel of you ;) I'm really enjoying Victoire and Teddy. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Oooh you're good. You have picked up on my very subtle hints! You will find out in due course, of course, but there's plenty of drama left to unfold. I am so excited for this story and I've been planning it for a while. I just wanted to use my travel experience in a productive way and I hope you'll continue to enjoy this. Thank you so much for reviewing :)

Marina


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