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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Hello! I'm here for the Fourth Day of the Twelve Days of Reviewing at the forums. :)

You have REALLY caught my interest with this prologue. There are so many questions here that cannot be answered unless I read on. That's a really good hook for the beginning of a story, and I think you've just gained another reader (me!).

So, this is Scorose, written in a really different way. Somehow they were brought together because of an accident, but what was that accident? Had they never spoken before then? Under what circumstances did the accident happen, and was it really an accident? (I guess I'll have to read on to find out!)

Scorpius is "troubled." That's no surprise, considering who his father is! What does he do that marks him as a bad guy? Is he shunned by Hogwarts students, or is he accepted? Will his relationship with Rose be scorned or approved of?

What about Rose? How badly was she affected by the accident? Well, sure, she gained Scorpius, but at what cost? I don't think she'll ever be able to return to her previous naivete, but will she even WANT to?

Great first chapter! I will definitely read on! :)

Happy Holidays!

~UnluckyStar57

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