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Review:BookDinosaur says:
Hi! I'm here for the Fourth od the Twelve Days of reviewing, and even though I did skip you in my review thread, I really like this story and this review is way overdue.

I really like how you start each chapter with the same sentence. It brings a feeling of connection to the last chapter and the ones before that. I really enjoy hearing Ellie's sarcastic little comments as the opening lines to every chapter as well. :P It must be so hard to think of them all!

Oh dear, Al and Ellie still don't seem to be getting along that well either. I loved Ellie's statement to prove that she didn't have a small vcobulary range, haha. But is it just me or do they already like each other? I mean, Albus seemed to get a bit angry when she hugged Ben. And she seemed awfully fixated on his 'glinting' shoulders. Hmm.

I really liked Ellie's relationship with Ben, they were really friendly, and well, haven't we all bonded with someone just because they have an awesome pencilcase? Their banter was really fun and light and I really enjoyed reading it.

I loved Ellie's characterisation, she was as sassy and sarcastic as ever and her little asides and one-liners had me cracking up. I's not often story can make me laugh out loud this much. ;) I love her pop culture references as well, Ellie's a lovely girl. Her anecdote about having a crush on James because her saved her life was really funny as well, I enjoyed reading that.

I really liked how she explained that twins weren't exactly alike as well - I have a sister and a brother who are twins, and while they are similar in ways, they're very different as well and I alwasy get irritated when people think twins are carbom copies of one another.

This was an amazing chapter, you can bet I'll be back to read (and hopefully review) this lovely story some more! :D

Author's Response: You left such lovely reviews on the previous chapters! Of course I remember them!

Those. First. Sentences. So. Difficult. I'll often have the entire chapter written and then spend a week trying to figure out a good sentence for the beginning. I'm happy you like them!

Albus is so difficult to write! But yeah, they have a few difference in opinion, that's for sure! And I don't want to say if they like each other or not. I like the whole "will they, won't they?" thing they have right now! But she was a little fixated on his shoulders wasn't she? ... In a really angry way, of course!

I'm glad the story is making you laugh. I've never purposefully written humour before - it just kind of happens that way, but I'm glad that my humour is funny!

I don't have a twin, but I tend to view fraternal twins like any other siblings. There are some siblings who are years apart, but they're still really close and share a brain and everything.

Thanks so much for this lovely review!


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