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Review:UnluckyStar57 says:
Hello! I'm here from the Fourth Day of the Twelve Days of Reviewing at the forums. Since I already reviewed the first chapter of this story, I thought I should review this one, too!

I really like the idea that you've got going in this story. Wizarding news is not something that's widely explored in fanfiction (not that I've seen), and it's cool that the medium you chose was radio. The current events that you put in the news broadcasts and the dialogue give me a clear picture of what's going on in the Wizarding World outside of the radio station.

Grace seems like a very interesting character so far. Old family of purebloods? Does she get treated badly for being pureblooded, or is the hatred for purebloods simply a thing that people still like to grumble about? What House was she in at Hogwarts?

Bill Weasley has been injured and they've called off the search for the gold. Do I sense a plot point? Will this ever come into play later on in the story? If so, I am very interested to see where it goes!

Happy Holidays!

~UnluckyStar57

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