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Review:patronus_charm says:
Aw, Remus to me is what Scorpius is to you, so yay for a Remus one-shot, I practically came skipping over here because he is just wsdfwefo , yeah I should stop Remus fangirling and get on with the review.

This one-shot showed why I loved your writing so much! Even though its description is so detailed and really great, I donít find myself lost in it and skipping lines to get to the story. It still has this appeal to it which makes me want to read it all and have more and more of it unlike with some other authors which have so much I end up drowning in it. This style of writing fitted with Remus really well and the bleak atmosphere of it all.

I loved the two versions of Remus shown in this one-shot with his wolf and human side being shown and the effects one had on the other. I rarely ever see those two parts of him melded together so much in a one-shot, but I really loved it here as it worked so well and really gave me a full picture of who Remus Lupin really was.

This line ĎThe thing about Lycanthropy, however, was that the worst came round again like clockwork.í Was just ♥ It really caught all the pain of Remus and how much he had to suffer from being a werewolf and was generally an amazing line. That entire theme of it coming back around for him worked really well here as we got him doing normal things such as having Christmas but then having to deal with the illness and transformation of being a wolf.

The way you showed he was so young and still a child really was heart-breaking. The interactions between him and his parents were so heart-breaking because I could sense their guilt for causing this and how they could never take it away, yet Remus had somehow been able to accept it.

Ok, you went and broke my heart for the second time in twenty minutes! Lovely writing again, it was another beautiful one-shot and I hope there are more amazing one-shots lurking away there!

-Kiana

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