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Review:vettinag says:
I read this for the first time before I heard about this song, but when I heard of Florence and looked at the songs in her albums, something clicked in my head and I remembered this fic again. I feel, now that I know the song, I appreciate it fully, but as always reading a second time makes you think a little more.
What made my jaw drop, honestly, was not the fact that Lorcan made the coffins, but that Lily destroyed them. This is mostly because Lorcan probably worked really hard, like an artist at his work, to make them only to see them shattered by his fiance. That scene sort of made my heart break...
I can understand Lily's getting freaked out, but *sigh* I still feel awful she did what she did. I'm not saying its a flaw in your story - it HAD to happen! But God, I just wish she'd done something else with them, had them moved out of the house or something!
Ooh I'm feeling awful for Lorcan's work =/
It was an amazing bit of writing, as always :) Its something I will come back and read again!

Author's Response: Hello! Thank you so much for your review, and I am so, so desperately sorry I waited more than a year to respond to it...

More than anything: thanks for coming back to read this twice! That's a compliment in itself!! Also, I think you genuinely may be the first person to feel more sorry for Lorcan than Lily in this fic - most people are creeped out by him and were happy she trashed them, haha! I agree, destroying the coffins is a bit drastic. I'd be bummed if I was Lorcan. But I think if I was Lorcan I'd be bummed already, cos then I'd be an undertaker and, well, death is a bummer (understatement of the century).

Thanks so much for your review! ♥


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