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Review:BookDinosaur says:
Hello! I'm here with your requested review. :)

We both know I haven't read this story for quite a while, so I was pleasantly surprised to see how easily I managed to get back into the story. :)

I think, as always, your characters are wonderfully close to canon and I really enjoyed the role Augusta Longbottom played in this chapter. From the little we saw of her in the books she;s a stubborn, domineering but kind-hearted old lady, and you definitely managed to bring that out in her and make her a lovely character to read about.

I loved your twist on the Prophecy in this chapter as well - if Harry died, and Harry was the only one who could defeat Voldemort, Neville could take his place because he was also suited to the Prophecy. It's a very interesting idea, and very creative, so well done there. :D

I really liked what Ron said about the Patronus Charm, it was very Ron-like and in character, when he was surprised that Neville could cast a patronus. It reminded me of the Yule Ball, when he took the tone of surprise when Hermione looked nice. :P And it was heartbreaking to know that Neville had been pracrtcing the patronus for Harry, and then Harry died without knowing. :(

The only thing I noticed here was that you described Neville's hedgehog patronus as ambling, and I don't think it would be ambling because 1) I'm not sure that hedgehogs can even amble, and 2) From what I got, this is a pretty urgent time, to messages would be going around quickly and discreetly.

Feel free to ignore that, it's just my take on it. This was a great chapter I enjoyed reading. Well done!

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

I've added a note to fix the ambling of the hedgehog.

For the Prophecy, I have the idea that there's possibly more people than anyone knows that could meet the requirements. Even in the 5th book when Harry took the Prophecy off the shelf, there was still a "?" on it. :)

It was difficult to write a bit there because of the tears. :(

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!


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