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Review:Secret Santa says:
Ho ho ho!

Okay so first off: THIS WAS SUPER AWESOME!!! Ohmigosh! There was action, description, history. Ugh! The only thing that would make it better is a smidge more description such as what the certain new people looked liked. And what exactly are MLEP? Magical Law Enforcement... Protectors? Just explain what that is and you'll be golden!

Ooh, so the title intrigues me. What's a Kestrel? Or *the* Kestrel? Or is it kestrel with a lowercase k? I'm super excited to see how this pans out, but not super excited because there are only 3 chapters. How dare you? I'm going to get sucked into this and it won't take me too long to finish!

Oh, right! Why isn't Ron technically an auror? Either explain it in this chapter or in a later one, because that specific part is quite vague and I'm a little confused as to why he isnít.

But this was super good! Tiny little details such as how Ron hated it because of the dementors and such, canon facts such as Hermione's position. Ugh, this was really good!

Oh, so just to tell you, at the start, I thought Mrs. Weasley was Molly Weasley and I was really confused, but then I realized why Hermione was Mrs. Weasley and it was a really blonde moment for me (although I'm not blonde, so that was strange). But I really liked how you subtly included the fact that they were married without explicitly saying that they were. Very classy.

One more thing, I'm pretty sure I talked about how your characters' dialogue was pretty stiff in one of your other stories considering their setting, this dialogue was the exact same eloquence, yet it worked because of the situation. I was really glad to see that because nothing's worse than the minister asking someone 'hey, what's up?'

So, yeah! Great job!
Secret Santa

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

I looked through my notes and for once I didn't write down the acronym definition. If I had to guess, I think that MLEP would be Magical Law Enforcement Personnel.

A kestrel is a bird of prey.

Ron was an Auror until he retired to work with his brother George at WWW. For this story, Harry recalls Ron to active Auror status to protect Hermione.

Thank you very much for reading and reviewing!


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