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Review:hedwidgeon says:
This is a truly lovely start to a longer fic! You're absolutely right, you can't really begin a post-battle fic without taking into account all the grief that results from the battle. I think you did a very good job with that here, I definitely got a bit teary-eyed at multiple points.

The things that stood out to me most were things like Ginny stealing Ron's Cleansweep Eleven, Harry watching Ginny's dot on the Map, details like that--those, I think, really make a fic and you're doing a great job with those.

Also, I can really see George taking over planning the funeral, and everyone dressing as they want for it. That seemed so very fitting.

Good work so far, keep writing :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for leaving a review, I am glad you liked it! I am glad that the little details stood out to you, because those are what I always love the most about stories.
I love that George's character seemed accurate, I really wanted to stay true to everyone's spirit, so I am glad to hear that :)
Thanks again for taking the time to leave a review!

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