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Review:Lululuna says:
Hi again! :)

Ah this was such an intriguing chapter, and I love how much we learned about the characters and the logistics of the time and the voyage to Acanthus. I'm curious about the stories of explorers disappearing on the way to Acanthus, and worried about whether there is some sinister force at work. I think Rose is right to be suspicious about the circumstances and how convenient and planned the whole thing seems.

I really liked the mentions of the war from the wizards' POV as it was something I was wondering about. David's story of deserting was interesting and something which I feel is quite understandable and how he didn't believe in the cause. I figured wizarding men might feel the pressure to join up - or even want to join to fight for the country, like David - and so that was very realistic. The moment between them was very sweet. I'm so curious about what Lorcan is up to with running off with the map, ah! Hopefully it was a good surprise and not something nasty, although I am inclined to suspect the latter.

Even before I read the author's note I felt that Scorpius' escape seemed a little too convenient for him, hmm. I still have no idea what the man is up to and if he's working for or with anyone, and am very confused but in a good way. I have this weird suspicion about Rashidi as well, I'm not sure why, but maybe the mentions of the local family have woken me up as a paranoid reader. :P

Amazing chapter as usual, on to the next one now! :)

Author's Response: Hi! :D

I'm glad that you liked learning more about the technical side of the travels in this chapter because it was rather different but fun for me to write. I think Rose will definitely remain suspicious until she has some solid answers which won't be for a while yet!

I'm glad that you liked learning more about the war from the magical perspective. I always wondered what they would have done in key events such as WWI so I was glad to get the chance to do it. I'm glad that you found David's actions realistic as I was a little worried about how people would view them, but I guess as a wizard he's probably more likely to desert than as a Muggle. Haha, it just shows that I've been mean with my cliff-hangers as they were usually bad, you'll just have to read on and find out :P

I'm glad it's confusion in a good way, because when I was trying to that section it was bad confusion for me :P Haha, you're actually the first to suspect Rashidi, but I can't really say whether he's in with the man or not :P

Thanks for another amazing review, reading your theories was fun!

-Kiana



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