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Review:MissesWeasley123 says:
It's the hap - happiest season of all...

Good lord Adi! I'm so glad I thought of this story for the 12 Days of Reviewing! A great excuse for me to go through your Author's Page!

And... this is exactly what I needed. I love parodies, and this one really put me in a brighter mood. First of all, I loved the beginning, it was such an eye roll, but so funny too, because of the way you worded it. This, this was golden:

A total of 564687768567 males and 3 females had asked her out in her life, but she had only ever had one boyfriend - Teddy Lupin.

LOL. The most randomest number and perhaps incredibly funny because we both know that there aren't even that many people on Earth. Still, hilarious.

Teddy *swoons* He's so.. so dreamy. I love him so much. I think I should just have him. Unlike Victoire, I can cook too. (kindofnotreallybutshhh)

And I don't even want to point this out, because I know from your later writing you've fixed this, but just in case, the only CC I would have is the dialogue. For example:

"That smells... interesting." Remarked Bill... -- this should be, "That smells... interesting," remarked Bill. Just with that comma instead of a period, since you added a dialogue tag. But you only did that a couple of times, so a quick read through would be okay. Otherwise, leave it, this was perfect.

I really loved the gathering, because our beloved Weasleys all showed up, which was great. Andromeda was hilarious, oh my. I loved how she still tried to be polite to Victoire's terrible cooking, but it was so much fun to watch her in pain. (I know, I'm evil) And Arthur and his plane obession were a nice touch.

Okay, so that turkey thing, sounded gross and ew. But that was one of the things I loved was that even though things were so crazy, you never stopped with the description. Your characterizations were perfect, and again - I really enjoyed your piece. It's one I'll come back to whenever I'm feeling down!

I hope you're having a great holiday Adi! Come back soon ♥
Nadia

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