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Review:BookDinosaur says:
Oh my flipping Merlin riding a pink bicycle in his knickers. That was the most colourful phrase could think of off the top of my head but somehow it feels sadly lacking and I'm left feeling unsatisfied. Gah. :P

You are amazing at writing suspense/mystery and I swear during this chapter I was all puzzled an then Rose's big revelation came along and I was just gaping like a lunatic because somehow it makes sense but it doesn't. You know, this chapter basically had nothing at all to help me figure out what the cabbage s going on but somehow I don't mind because you're writing it so well.

Okay, onto something more coherant now, I'm very excited that this has plot twisted and involved time travel, because I'm reading Play the Devil right now which also includes time travel and I'm thinking well maybe you and Jenna can start a trend of time traveling stories.

I loved the introduction of Charlotte and Edward and Anthoy and their crew. They seemed really nice, and their attitude really suited the time they're in, at least so far as I know. The dresses, and how Charlotte spoke all contributed to the bumbling old person from another century image I'm sure you were trying to get. So while they seemed nice I'm thinking maybe they set a trap to lure innocent twenty-first century people back to 1922 for reasons as yet unknown to me. Because let's admit it, it's odd that Charlott is the only female on this expedition.

Gah, you're making me suspicious towards everyone. Kiana. this isn't fair. *pouts*

I love Lorcan during this chapter as well, even though we don't see much of him. His face seizing up? Wonderful. Fainting? Well, I thought guys were meant to be the tough ones. He was all-around wonderful iin here and I hope to see more of him soon. :P

I'm loving this so far Kiana, everything is just perfect. :D

Author's Response: Wow, that is quite an impressive phrase, even more so than Merlin's pants so I may need to steal it if I the occasion arises :P

Yay, I'm glad that I stunned you into a confusion of not really knowing anything as that's my aim. I'm sorry about not really helping you figure it out, but feel for Rose she's in that situation with no help! At least we have Scorpius and the man now and then to help us deriddle it :P

I'm so glad that you liked the plot twist as I know some people are just like ew time travel go away. Haha, yes Play the Devil is a great time travel story and I think a craze for it would be fun!

I'm so glad that you liked the new crew because they will be a very important part of the story from now. Charlotte is a dear to me, so I'm so glad that the stiff early twentieth century image was pulled off well! Bahaha, it's not a trap and Charlotte being a girl is a simple answer which is just society not really being keen on letting girls out for an adventure in Egypt.

Guys can be weak here too, and as a feminist I try and show that both genders have their faults and can defy expectations :P You definitely will see more of him, so you're in luck!

Thanks for a fabulous review, Emily, I'm so glad that you're liking!

-Kiana


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