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Review:Secret Santa :) says:
Merry Christmas (a day late) from your Secret Santa! RL has a way of getting in the way of my planned reviewing, but there is definitely more in store this month! :)

I liked this chapter! Meeting the parents was especially fun for me, and I love what you did with them. Harry was my favorite, I think; I could see him being a doting father to his kids, and you brought that side of him out really well. And Lily makes the perfect Daddy's girl :)

Glitter's going to be another fun character, I can tell. I love his banter with Lily! But I do hope he doesn't push her into anything that isn't right for her. I wasn't a fan of that last item on his list, and I hope to see Lily make the decision based on what she wants to do, not based on outside pressure.

My biggest CC for this chapter is that the "dollop-head" discussion might have gone on just a little too long. Although I really enjoyed the nextgen kids together. You've clearly done a lot of planning beforehand in regards to each of their characters, and it really shows here :)

I'm liking this! Lily's voice is fun to read and you have a very vibrant cast going. I'll try reeealy hard to make it back for another review soon. But in the meantime, keep up the good work!

--Hufflepuff Secret Santa

Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much for your lovely compliments!

Glitter is my favourite character. He's so fun to write! That last item on the list comes back and gets explained a bit more. My thoughts are along the same lines as you, don't worry!

Oh, okay. I'll work on that in future chapters - thanks for letting me know! And yeah, I have a whole word document with their basic personalities, birthdays and occupation so I'm glad that it's paid off!

Thank you so much for the lovely review, Maggie! You're the best Santa ever! :D

- Kayla :)


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