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Review:The White Bearded Man in the Red Suit says:
Hello!

First, I want to so that I am sorry - in my last review, I had called you 'Alli' which I mistaken you for someone else, so please excuse that. =^]


Secondly, you have welcomed me to another brilliant chapter!

I love Professor McGonagall, and it's a really nice change for me to read just through her point-of-view. :D

I also love Ophelia now and how you wrote their interaction with each other while maintaining the Gryffindor Head of House character.

I find it quite hard to write her even when I am not writing in her p.o.v. so I applaud you! *bows and tips my hat*


I thought it was super cool too how you have Ophelia 'owling' for delivery food (and from far away too!) as if modern-day people who order food on phones. It was indeed a nice touch.

In addition, you really did a great job connecting with Sophie on a personal and emotional level! The way how you describe what it was like for her on her own on those streets yet she still found haven it them.


Again, marvelous, well done!


Going to read more and look out for more of my Christmas Reviews! ^_^


Speaking of which, Merry Christmas my dear!


- Secret Santa

Author's Response: Wow, this was such a wonderfully long review! Thanks for that! It really made me smile!

And no worries about the name mistake. I knew what you meant and it didn't bother me at all.

Aw. Thanks for the compliments! You're making my head swell up too big to fit through the doorways!

Writing Ophelia was so much fun, and so many people have seemed to like her! I almost wish I had included her more in the story. And it was really fun to give Minerva a friend who was so different from herself. Glad you thought the friendship worked despite the differences.

I'm not sure if people really could "owl out" for food or not, but I wanted to make the NYC Wizarding community both familiar and yet new at the same time, so I fudged a little bit. Was fun to get creative though.

And yes, I'm so happy you are connecting with Sadie! She's a character that means a lot to me, but I wasn't sure anyone else would like her. So excited that she's picking up new friends!

Thanks again for such fun Christmas reviews! You really went above and beyond with the Secret Santa gifts this year!


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