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Review:LilyLou says:
YAY! BBWOTTER UPDATED!

I was so thrilled to see this--it's been too long! Again, I loved the chapter! Just a few CC's, though?

This was a filler, but I wish you would have elaborated just a little more on things. You know, like the surroundings. What did Vic's look like? What do Louis' Veela looks look like? I just want a little more detail. The quotes drowned out everything else so adding more narrative will help with the quality immensely.

I can't wait for more!

-Janelle xxx

Author's Response: Oh darling thank you! I guess I just wanted to get the story out as soon as possible that I just didn't edit it very well. The que's not back up 'til the 3rd I think so I think I'll update the edited chapter by then.

And where have you been young lady? I need The Life of Annie Powells now! heheh

Thanks for the review sweetheart, got any ideas for the next chapter too?
*bats eyelashes*

Bochra xxx


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