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Review:Hogwarts27 says:
Hi, I'm still enjoying this story, even though you're writing Snape a bit softer than I like to see him, even for one of these AU stories. Still, you're doing a better job of keeping some reserve and gruffness to his character than a lot of other authors I've come across who attempt a story like this, and I do commend you for that.

My favorite part of this chapter was when you explored Snape's thoughts about Lucius, Draco, and the quidditch brooms. The logic you used was really good, it fit well with Canon, and it was an interesting read.

And the way you described Snape in the last paragraph was absolutely perfect for a story like this - where he thinks of children as little demons but on the other hand feels strangely lonely. I could absolutely see that as Canon Snape. Just lovely and wonderfully bittersweet.

Author's Response: I really had trouble writing this chapter as I pondered how to do this chapter so I am glad the Lucius/Quidditch situation worked out for ya! I actually talked it over with my 8 year-old who actually told me that rich people did stuff like all the time and if Snape had said no then he wouldn't be thought of as a Death Eater anymore. LOL! (I may be giving away too many of my secrets here...but yes...I bounce ideas off my kid! Tee Hee!)

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