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Review:Hogwarts27 says:
Hi again. This chapter was a very enjoyable read. I especially liked the part with Snape at the Dursleys where he could be his usual edgy self. And locking Vernon in the cupboard was a hoot! What a fun scene. I didn't notice any flaws with your writing. It feels pretty polished. The descriptions feel just right, not too much and not too little. And the sentences all flow nicely. The dialogue feels pretty authentic and believable too, though Snape is out of Canon character in the places where he's being AU and concerned about Harry. But I think you're doing a commendable job trying to strike a balance between an edgy cold Canon Snape and an AU Harry-protecting Snape. Personally I don't like to see much softness in Snape at all, even in one of these AU stories where he's Harry-friendly, but that's just my own taste, and everyone has different ideas about where to draw the line with that. Overall you've done a great job with this story so far, and I look forward to reading more of it.

Author's Response: Aww thanks. I have really been struggling in trying to keep Snape in Cannon as much as possible since that has always been my biggest pet peeve with other stories that I have read. It is rather difficult since we normally only see him in the ways that he treats Harry and that is where he changes the most in this story, but I will do what I can! :)

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