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Review:DracoFerret11 says:
Hello there! This is DarkRose from the forums! I decided to read and review all of the Writer's Duel entries! :D So, let's go over things:

Plot: This was a funny take on this prompt, and I thought it was really cute. Normally I don't like stories with children in them prominently, but I thought this one was pretty good. Albus and Lexi were funny and believable and I could definitely see this happening. I assume "Theo" is Theodore Nott (who I ADORE because he features hugely in my story, "Rule Breaker"), and I like that you made a former-Slytherin friends/coworkers with a former-Gryffindor. I love that dynamic.

Characterization: Really good job with the kids. I don't think I could write for anyone under the age of sixteen. That's about as far back as I remember, so that's about as far back as I could write. :) But you did a great job creating very distinct characters and giving them unique voices. Well done.

Descriptions: I loved seeing the world through a child's eyes. It was interesting the choices you made in what Albus noticed and didn't notice. Really cool.

Overall, this was cute and funny and I think you did a good job. Good luck in the Duel!


Author's Response: Hey, Emily!

I'm glad you like my take on the prompt; the idea came to me as soon as I saw it and it seemed different, so I had to go for it. :) Theo is Theodore Nott, I love him so much that he had to be in it. He's very good friends with Harry, for reasons that make sense in my headcanon. I'm glad you like that. :D

Kids are easy for me because I have a big family of all ages, so I can draw from them, you know? Plus Al reminds me of me. :P

Thank you so much for leaving a review!


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