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Review:MidnightBlue_x says:
And here I am! Back with your second review. Let's get to it straight away.

The moment I read the first line of this chapter, I was very happy. I was really hoping we'd get to see some Hermione as well as Ron. I really like reading about the different lives that the Golden Trio are living after the War- I love seeing how they all cope with it differently. I feel so sorry for Ginny. I understand that Harry would want time to recover, but I really hope he sucks it up soon. I like how Hermione is still upset by all the deaths she saw. I think it's especially important that she feels sorry for Lavender, even after the whole thing with Ron. That definitely struck me as being very Hermione-like.

Like in the previous chapter, I'd like seeing some of the more minor characters too. I'm hoping that we do get to see a lot more of them in future chapters. I'm still really enjoying the story- I absolutely loved hearing from Hermione's point of view. I'm especially interested about the rebuilding of the castle, I like how the students are getting the chance to participate. That seems like a very Hogwarts thing to me.

I'm sorry this one is a little bit shorter than the last one- I didn't want to repeat myself too much. Now, onto my final review.

x Ely

Author's Response: Thank you for coping with my triple-request! I don't mind that it's short, I'd rather that than just rambling. I'm trying to fit in minor characters (they're some of my favorites!), but I always have trouble writing them. Like Luna - I struggle writing her even though I adore her! That's absolutely something that I need to work on. The rebuilding of the castle is sort of pushed aside for a bit, but it comes back into play in a major way later in the novel :). Thanks again for the reviews.

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