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Review:MidnightBlue_x says:
Hi, this is ElysiumJayne from the forums here with the reviews you requested! Sorry that this took me a little bit longer to get to than I thought it would. Anyway, on with the reviews!

I don't usually read in this era, thought it is something I enjoy. In most of the ones I've read, they usually focus entirely on Hermione or Harry, and while I'm not the biggest fan of Ron- I actually enjoyed reading about him here. I love how he doesn't advertise who he is/what he's done etc. I think that's much more in character for Ron than the alternative. I love how you've written George, he's got his usual cheekiness but it was nice to see how the loss of Fred was affecting him. The fact that he was so worried about losing his business was very realistic in my mind- it was nice to see him in a different light. I think the part of the mirror was particularly powerful.

I think you wrote all the other characters brilliantly. I particularly loved Molly and Fleur who I love the little sort of tension between. I was especially happy to see Andromeda and little Teddy- they are two of my favourite characters and I loved seeing them included.

Moving on from the characters now- you asked about the plot. I think that it was very enjoyable to read. I actually enjoyed reading about Ron which isn't usually something I can say. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapters. My only real suggestion is that there are a few parts that could do with a little bit more description added to- there were parts that seemed to go very quickly that maybe needed a bit more attention.

I'll start on your next review now, see you then!

x Ely

Author's Response: Thank you for the review! You took a fine amount of time, don't worry (I have a review thread, I know). I love Ron. I don't know why, but I really love him, and who I think he'd grow up to be. I'm glad that you think the characters are written believably, I find it hard to find a balance. Obviously, they'd change. Not only from age, but because of what they all went through, but they wouldn't be completely different people. I'm really glad that you enjoyed it. I agree that I could use some more description (I'm such a hypocrite, I almost always say that when I review people). Thanks again, I look forward to reading the other reviews!

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