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Review:GingeredTea says:
I'm spreading some Holiday Cheer and asked for some brilliant not-as-appreciated-as-they-should-be stories. Violet Gryfindor put your name up for grabs. So, here I am. And let me say, although this is not normally my "type" of story, this is a very good story and Violet Gryfindor made a good choice. :)

I really liked your beginning - choosing to start the story from a slight distance voiced through someone we don't know. It was an appealing entrance.

This made me burst out laughing: /Let me assure you, though, that Iím not the kind of witch that worships the ground he walks on or tries to fish his used tissues out of the rubbish bin to hug before bedtime instead of stuffed animals or, barring that, emotionally unavailable parents./

I love this narrator and the humor you have used. Great job.

This was wonderfully put together and I am so glad Violet Gryfindor recommended you. I hope this unexpected review spread a little more cheer on your holidays. :)

Happy Holidays!
Review what you Read!
Tory

:)

Author's Response: Ahh sorry for the response delay; it's been a busy few weeks for me, but this truly did brighten my day. I have to thank Susan for recommending me, but of course, thank you for reviewing at all! Truly a little bit of holiday cheer :)

I'm glad you liked that beginning! I love the idea of starting a story off with a distance that implies third person POV but is all of a sudden revealed to be first person, so that's what I was going for. And hehe that's one of my favorite pseudo-run-on sentences, which is saying something, because Augusta has a lot of those. I love her for it and I'm glad you do too.

Again, thank you so much for this little gem of a review :)


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