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Review:Secret Santa says:
I just love the concept of your story! Not many write a fic centring Harry and Ron and their friendship, so I'm glad someone's trying. :) congrats for doing that!

This idea was really interesting. It was so much like Arthur to tell Ron the story of Harry Potter and Molly refusing to do so. It was all believable.

Just thought that you should make it a little longer, I mean more descriptive. That would help us know more about what Ron's childhood was like.

Overall, this was a really nice read! Will be back with the other two reviews for the next two chapters! Just like a true Secret Santa. ;)

Author's Response: Sorry for taking so long to respond to your reviews. I really appreciated getting them :D

The friendship between Harry, Ron, and Hermione was one of my favorite things about the HP series, and I feel like it's often overlooked in fanfiction. Similarly, I think Ron gets a bad rap in fanfics, so I wanted to write a Ron and Harry friendship story that really focused on how Ron changes throughout the years, and the struggles that he has to overcome, as the Hero's best friend.

I know that descriptions are something that I struggle with, and I'm continuing to work on that. I appreciate you mentioning it, though. It's a good reminder to keep working on that skill.

Thanks again for your review!


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