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Review:patronus_charm says:
I really enjoyed the one-shot of yours I read a couple of days ago so when I saw you post in RRT, I couldnít help but tag! Also, Iíve never really read all that much Snily so I thought it would be fun to branch out a little more.

Ah the descriptions in here were just ♥ ♥ ♥ They were all connected to death and life with the constant references to hearts and blood and I really loved that because if it Snily had happened it does make you question whether who lived and died may have been different or not. They were such strong descriptions too (if that makes sense?) and really stayed in my mind for a while after.

I think the thing which really made this one-shot to me was how strong Snapeís pain was and how it never really faded from him. It was the way that he never really wanted or could let her go. It really showed how much Snapeís life was tied to hers and it worked really well because in the books it never really seems that Snape ever got over Lily with the whole Ďalwaysí things.

The inclusion of thud-thud was a really great one and showed how much their lives were tied to one another and couldnít really live without the other. I know I feel as if Iím repeating myself itís just the constant theme of this was a really great one and one that carried on throughout so it worked really well.

The last line was really perfect and so true too. It didnít seem to be just in a literal sense but perhaps at the ending of their friendship Lily lost an old part of herself.

Ah, this was brilliant!

-Kiana

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