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Review:Lululuna says:
Hi there! :) This story was so adorable: I love the original take on the mistletoe prompt by writing about these two as little children and how Albus thinks Lexi is so icky. It was very sweet and realistic, and I loved how Albus' voice was so stubborn and simple, just like a little child would be. The comments about Theo smelling like bath time really made me laugh, and how of course Albus, who seems very clean and anti-germs even as a child, would think bath time is a very good thing.

His relative dislike for Lexi was so silly as well, how he was happy that he knew more than her about the mistletoe, and even referring to Teddy as teaching him grown-up stuff when I think Teddy would still be quite young at this point was sweet and very childlike. Harry's comment about giving it time was so adorable too- maybe Lexi and Albus will return to the mistletoe in twelve years or so? Oh, I also really enjoyed when Albus said that Lexi belongs to Theo and how she isn't really an Angel, it was so funny.

Harry was such a wonderful character here, I love seeing him as a Daddy. I love picturing him as this awesome dad who tells stories and makes Hermione's voice. :P It made me feel all happy and Christmassy to think about it. Amazing job and good luck with the Duel! :)

Author's Response: Hey!

I'm so glad you like my take on the prompt; it seemed like it would be something a bit different to what one might usually read and I really liked the idea. It just had to be about Albus, who is very anti-germs. Bath time is his favorite thing ever. :D

Ah, he really doesn't like Lexi when they're young, or at least he thinks he doesn't. ;) It's 2012, so Teddy is... fourteen. Al thinks he knows a lot of grown up things now. :P

Twelve years... did you make a guess or have you read Silver Linings? ;)

I love writing Harry in this, he'd be a very cool daddy.

Thank you so much for leaving a review!

Sam.


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